Wednesday, 4 June 2014

The Two Adventurers


Once upon a time, there lived a nine year-old orphan girl named Maddiline. she lived in a place that had trees, flowers, millions of animals, and it had a city on the far end of it.
One day Maddiline Found a hole in the ground, the hole was damp with a REALY stinky smell. She looked around the hole for a little while and saw a little boy (Around 5) She thought. “Who are you, why are you in that hole, and were do you live?” She asked. 
“My names Dungy.” The boy said. “i’m in this hole because i had a treasure map and i wanted to see were it went so i followed the map here. I wasn’t  looking were i was going so i dropped in this hole. And i live in the city.”
“Ok, do want me to help you up?”
“Yes Please.”
“Oh, my names Maddiline if you wanted to know, and can i come with you on your adventure?” 
“Sure you can come.”
So Maddiline helped him out of the hole and they went on there adventure to the mysterious place. First the map said to go west intel You saw a rock with a cat symbol on it. So they went west, after walking for a while it became dark, so they started to set up camp. When they finished they went in there tents and fell asleep.
Suddenly Maddiline heard a swishing sound, she opened her eyes and saw a shadow. (What is that) She thought. Then She went back to sleep, terrified.
In the morning Maddiline got up and noticed that Dungy was gone! She looked everywhere for him, but she couldn’t find him. (Maybe the Shadow was a kidnapper!) She thought. She tried to calm herself down by thinking that the shadow was actually Dungy. But it didn’t work because she knew it was actually a kidnapper. She was even more terrified, she knew that the kidnapper was going to kidnap her next. So she went to go save Dungy from the kidnapper. 
First she needed to know were the kidnapper put Dungy and were his or her secret base was. She had absolutely no luck, she looked everywhere but in a wet, smelly cave. She tried the cave. Thats were she found Dungy in a bird cage without the perch. She also saw the kidnapper with funky hair, black clothes, and the kidnapper was sitting on a chair. She snuck inside the cave, she saw a knife on a table beside the chair that the kidnapper was sitting on. She went closer, then closer, and when she was close enough the kidnapper saw her. She was now so terrified, she grabbed the knife and threw it at the kidnapper, the kidnapper took one last breath, and fell to the floor with a thump. 
She unlocked The bird cage that Dungy was in and Dungy got out. “Thanks for saving me.” Said Dungy. “Your welcome.” Said Maddiline. They continued there adventure to the mysterious place. 
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After a while They heard singing.


I’m in my little nest,
Fleas are such a pest,
Why don’t you sing with me tonight?
Such a good day for singing,
All  the  bells are dinging,
Why don’t you sing with me tonight?
Such a Good day for Flying too,
Just me and you!
Flying, Singing, Dinging,
All in my good days work,
Let Us All Sing!

They saw who it was coming from, a little robin in it’s nest. “Thats a lovely song.” said Maddiline. “Were did it come from?” 
“I made it up.” said the robin.
“Oh, my names Maddiline, this is Dungy. Whats your name?”
“My names Robby”
“Do you want to come adventuring with us?”
“Sure.”
Then they continued on there adventure to the mysterious place.
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Soon they saw a light in the distance. A much brighter light than the sun. They got closer and saw a glowing man. “Come with me to the fare palace.” Said the man. “For that is were your going off to.” 
“How do you know that? You didn’t even look at the map.” Said Dungy.
“I know because my king has made you come to this place, he sent the map to Dungy, he made him fall in the hole so that he would meet you Maddiline.”
“Wow” Said Maddiline. “You know my name”
“Of course i know your name, i even know Dungy’s name. Now come with me to your destination.”
Maddiline and Dungy followed. It was like they were in a dream. There was a fountain right in front of the palace, so much trees, and inside what Maddiline much liked, the king waiting for them on the other side of the gate. They lived happily ever after in the beautiful palace.






The End

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